gais...malem... dari pada geje an mending belajar ;)
cie~~~~ kayak anak rajin ya bahasaku....
well kali ini aku mau share opinion paragraph nuy.....
udah pernah bikin belum ????
jadi gaiiss, opinion paragraf tu semacam dua argument yang dijadikan dalam satu paragraf. so.... pastiin conjunction kalian udah tepat ya gaiss biar gak bikin pusing pembaca..hehehe
kali ini aku akan kasih salah satu contoh,perhatikan setiap kalimat dengan warna berbeda.
check this out !!
Is Part Time Job Good for Students?
Take
a part time job beside study at school can be rewarding experience if we look
forward to our future,but it will be wise if we consider whether or not we take a part time job because there are
many thing that will be influenced.
Several people talk about the negative impact of taking
part time job and attending school. Mostly,
it will be quite difficult for students because we only have a little time in
order to do our school’s duties. Consequently, many
students who work part time fail to perform at their best both on schoolwork
and on examinations.
Furthermore,
part time job can contaminate our spare time and of course limit their social
life. They even don’t have much time to relax and socialize with their
families, friend or even only for have a
trip refresh their mind. Moreover, students may get exhausted in order to defend both
of their school and their job. It can be serious problem for their health
because it leads students become stress when there is clash of schedule. On
the contrary, people argue the positive impact of part time job for students.
They
state that a part time job is very
useful for students because it helps
students have a sense of independence when
they can pay their dialy need. They also can help their parents in order
to decrease their insurance .
Working also can be worthy experience if when they are able to balance both employment and their study. Students
can derive a great deal more than money, means that they will have a chance to
be much better person such as discipline and responsible. Moreover
, by having part time job, they can develope their skill if they have a job
that having correlation with their degree of study. For example student of English
Department take a part time job as tutor in English course institute. In conclusion, taking a part time job beside
attending school or college is very
exhausting, we have to convince that we can do both as well as possible and
have a talk with our teacher or our lecturer if we decide to take a part time job for setting
the schedule.
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Advantages
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Disadvanteges
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(Marge Eberts, Ed.S.) The first
advantage is that students can earn money. Taking a part-time job,in this
point,students can pay a part of their living cost,and at the same time
relieve their parents` burden.
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(Peggy Gisler ) It is the lack of time for focus on studies. There is a
high possibility that students will have trouble finding time to study. As a
result,they get exhausted, and even skip classes to have a sleep after hard
work.
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(Andy
Grove) Another advantage is that students can acquire more
experiences and polish their skills when taking part-time jobs. For example,
if someone enjoys teaching, working part-time as a tutor may help him or her
improve teaching skills and gain experiences. |
(Peggy Gisler, Ed.S ) Student who
takes part time job may sleep fewer hours,less exercise and eat on run.
Moreover, they may experience stress with a difficult or time-consuming
project. Also, it can endanger the health
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(Steve Jobs)Part time job can help students
develop their organizational and multi-tasking skills. They will have to get
used to holding a job and attend the university simultaneously. It is the
chance to learn time management,discipline and responsible.
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(David Head)If student work in weekend, the
start spending less time with their familes. They cannot spend entire day at
the zoo or take a day trip to see their grandmother
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By: Rosa Maharani
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